Reflecting on Feedback

      I feel that the feedback I got was very positive in that it says I'm heading in the right direction. I received some concrete ideas about where to solidify the direction of the paper and the papers main question. Once I began looking into quaternions more, I became more and more aware of the debate going on over their use. I had been starting to identify a different angle that would focus on this controversy. I think using this debate to say something about the larger scientific process as a whole could be a very fun and interesting angle to pursue.